First Episode of The Misadventures of Slim O. Wittz, Soft-Boiled Detective,
A Mystery Short Story Series by Larry and Rosemary Mild
Story One
SLIM CHANCE
Shame City, U.S.A.

   

MY NAME IS SLIM O. WITTZ. I’m a shamus, a private eye, and I’m at Voluptuous’s desk signing reports. Yeah, Voluptuous! That’s my secretary’s name. Vo says she was born with that moniker. I’ll give her the benefit of the doubt, though you could also add Volcanic, Voracious, Vociferous and Voluminous. They all fit.

If you ain’t out dodging bullets, you’re dealing with killer paperwork. My pen bumps into something under the document I’m trying to sign. I know what it is even before I look. Vo has been clipping her nails again. How many times do I gotta tell that dame it ain’t dignified here in the office. I finish signing the top report and weigh the sheet in my hand, wondering whether Vo’s extra coats of Wite-Out warrant more postage. When I interviewed her, she said she could type. I took her at her word. But after I hired her, she warned me that if I faulted her typing, she’d sue me for sexual harassment. Logic and Vo don’t always make good partners. The brain waves in her lovely platinum blonde head don’t always reach their destinations. On the other hand, the screwy logic could be her modus operandi. Maybe that’s the only way she can get an employer to keep her on. But never mind. I stomach her steno screw-ups on account of her hourglass measurements and gorgeous gams.

The godfather clock next door chimes nine times, and I can see from my office through the frosted glass to the corridor that the second floor is deserted. I tell clients: Turn right when you step out of the elevator. It’s the eighth door on your right. I have to remind people to count correctly. You see, my ex-brother-in-law, Elmer, is a sign painter. He counted wrong and painted my name on the wrong glass door. You’d think he’d have had a clue when he had to scrape the word “MEN” off first. I gotta wonder how many clients I piddled down the drain that way.

Apparently, I didn’t learn my lesson with Elmer. I gave him fifty bucks to rent a bloodhound for a manhunt I’d been hired for. Did he go to the reputable kennel I sent him to? No way, Jose. A friend lent him a broken-down hound and Elmer pocketed the fifty. The useless pooch had a sinus condition the size of Delaware. The only thing that hound could smell was himself.

The office phone rings only once before I pick up: “Slim O. Wittz, Private Investigations. Neat, Complete and Discreet! Oh, hi, Mom.”

Mom ain’t really my mother. Actually, she belongs to my ex-wife, Fawn. I got custody of Mom after the divorce. Mom likes me much better than Fawn. To tell the truth, if she was twenty years younger, I’d have married her instead. But socializing ain’t on her mind tonight. As I listen, an ulcer sprouts in my gut.

“Wait, Mom, I don’t want anything more to do with Fawn. Mom . . . No!”

It’s useless to argue with a desperate woman. Fawn dumped her boyfriend. He was always beating up on her and messing with her head. Her body’s wallpapered with welts and bruises. Even though she booted him out and changed the locks on her doors, the guy won’t leave her alone. She’s afraid to go out and can’t sleep at night. Mom wants me to lean on this creep and get him to move on. On the phone she coaches me. Like I really need lessons.

“I’m counting on you, Slim. Let him know he can’t get away with that kind of behavior. Maybe even rough him up a bit. Get him to cease and desist, if you know what I mean. It’s the least you can do for someone who once loved you.”

Although I doubt any lingering love on Fawn’s part, I shrug my shoulders, say I’ll look into it and hang up.

Intimidation calls for more than chewing the ape out, so I pull open the top drawer of my desk and reach for my piece. It’s a vintage World War II .45 caliber automatic that I picked up last Saturday at a yard sale—tagged “As is. Ammo not included.” I’m not sure it’ll fire, even after a thorough cleaning. I scratch a memo to Vo to put bullets on my shopping list, along with a bottle of aspirin. I throw on my tweed sport coat, tuck the piece in the back of my belt, and head out.

My ’93 Buick Regal sits at the back of the lot where I left it. The car is a dull gray, with numerous silver duct-tape patches to hide the rust. I’d prefer a newer set of wheels, but the kind of work I do says I gotta stay inconspicuous. Okay, truth is, I’d rather drive one of them snazzy Eyetalian jobs, but business could be a little better.

I’m hoping the pit bull what owns the lot has left for the night. But as I reach for my door handle, two rows of busted teeth grin out at me from the driver’s seat: “You owe me two months’ parking and you ain’t leaving with this tin beast ’til you pay up.”

“Have a heart. I ain’t slept in my own bed for a week now.”

He shakes his eight-ball head. It’s then that I notice he’s parked another jalopy in front of mine, so I can’t get the Buick out anyway. I figure on pulling the smug S.O.B. out of my front seat and working him over. The runt reads my mind. He’s got a fist wrapped around a tire iron, tapping it gently against his other palm like a cop with an itchy night stick. Under the circumstances, I decide to reconnoiter another strategy. I hot-foot it back to the office, where I wrestle another night with my Castro Convertible couch. At some point the half-nelsons, headlocks and mattress-pins put me down for the count.

Next thing I know, Vo is leaning over me, shaking the living daylights out of me. A powerful aroma of cologne, lipstick and hairspray makes me almost pass out for good. I pop one eye open and find myself staring at the Appalachians. I didn’t know the Cumberland Gap was that deep.

“Hey, sleepyhead. Ya wanna talk with your ex? She’s on the phone.”

“Not really.” But I shuffle to the phone in my socks anyway. “Yeah!” I grouch into the mouthpiece, taking my miserable night out on her. “Yeah, so it’s morning. What of it? . . . Don’t thank me—I ain’t done nothing yet. . . . Fawn, I said I would. What’s the matter—my word ain’t no good anymore? Where do I find this schlemiel? . . . What’s that address again?” I write it down. “I’ll let you know. . . . Now don’t go trying all that sweet stuff on me. . . . Yeah, yeah, I’ll call you.” I hang up.

Mom told Fawn I’d take care of her stalking ex-boyfriend, so she’s making sure I won’t change my mind. That’s the trouble with dames. They think you forget them as soon as they’re out of sight. They’re wrong. I think about dames all the time.

But how come I feel so achy? I finally figure it out. I fell asleep with the gun still tucked in my belt. It left a bad impression on me, and now I’ll be sore all day with this .45 caliber pain in my backside. I tell Vo to add a shoulder holster to the shopping list—just as soon as we get a few more receivables.

A shave and fresh shirt help me back to feeling human again. Mom promised me a meal later, seeing as how I’m doing her this favor.

I shove the piece into my jacket pocket and head for the elevator. On the way down, I glance at the address Fawn gave me. It’s walking distance, about five blocks away. Pinsky’s Haberdashery. Mom told me the ex-boyfriend has two jobs. The haberdashery is his day job. I didn’t ask what Rocco’s other job was. Yeah, Rocco, at least that’s what Mom said his name was. Probably a harmless nickname.

I push open the glass door into Pinsky’s and waltz up to the only salesman in sight: a short, stocky buck I make out to be in his late thirties. Good looking and a sharp dresser, too. Kind of resembles me. Hmm . . . I can see why she’d fall for this dude.

I’m thinking this intimidation job is gonna be a cinch. I can’t figure how Fawn could be afraid of this guy. “You Rocco Vinnelli?” I ask in the gruffest voice I can muster.

“Naw, I’m Max Pinsky, the owner. That’s him coming in now.”

It takes seconds for this image to register. The locomotive entering the store comes at me in chugs. I decide Arnie Swartzenbagel’s got nothing on Mister Vinnelli. Except for the hair. Rocco’s Saint Bernard mane would make Beethoven jealous.

“Hey, Rocco,” Max greets him. “This gentleman’s been asking for you.”

“Hi. What can I do you for? Hey, just a joke, pal. How can I help you?”

I clear my throat and throttle back the gruff tone. “A friend told me you’d fix me up with a new sport jacket. Said you’d treat me right.”

Rocco grins broadly and motions for me to follow him to a rack of sport coats. I shed my threadbare jacket and hang it on a hook while he opens a spiffy tan job with brass buttons for my arms. As I slip into it, the key question keeps mulling around in my mind: how do you intimidate anyone six-four and 250-plus pounds?

The jacket’s tailored for Godzilla, but Rocco insists that it’s right for me. I feel his paws gripping extra material behind my back.

“As close to a perfect fit as you can get for your kind of figure,” he says smugly. “Room to grow, too. You don’t want to take all the sport out of sport coat, do you?”

Not daring to argue with a hulk towering half a foot over me, I ask whether he has something in blue, something that would take a few years off me. At forty-one I feel like I’ve crossed over a bridge that’s collapsed behind me. But I don‘t tell him that. He nods, and I try on a few more jackets—that is, I actually try to try them on, but I can’t even get both shoulders in at the same time.

“A bit skimpy,” Rocco admits, “but that’s the style these days, especially with the younger bunch. You did say you wanted younger.” He figures he’s lost the sale by now, and his glued-on smile begins to fade.

Just so he won’t think I’ve come in here for another reason, I ask if he expects any new merchandise. He tells me maybe next Wednesday, then reaches for my own jacket to help me into it. But as he picks it up, he feels the added weight. His pork-sausage fingers fumble through the pockets until he retrieves my .45 automatic.

He levels it at me. “Who the hell are you? No one goes this kind of shopping with a gun in their pocket. What are you up to?”

Max, quietly arranging ties on a display table, beats a retreat into the back room.

Rocco is one angry goon. He spins me around and slams me, face forward, over the counter so he can get at my wallet. My P.I. badge and I.D. card take him to another level of furious. “Who sent you? Was it Angel? Does he have a contract out on me?”

This concudes the first half of Story One.
And there are seven more hilarious Slim stories like it
in The Misadventures of Slim O. Wittz, Soft-Boled Detective.